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Odds this is awesome, don’t sell yourself short. I’d eliminate all this crap from your intro—“…Here’s something quite different: an immense, almost indigestible literary work. Rhymes. Archiac words. Convoluted metaphors. All the sorts of things modern readers don’t have time for anymore. At least not in one giantic mouthful. And that’s why…” the whole would ring much truer.

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